STORY DRAFT 1
STORY DRAFT
1 (NERD PUPPET)
Story is
about bullying
Bully victim
– 4th grade kid namely Roy
Bully – 7th
grade kid namely ben
(7th grade ben used to bully 4th grade Roy every
day, but the story is how he gets bullied and he feels and how his heart and
brain finally comes out and have an argument regarding the situation)
Story starts
with Roy (victim)standing in front of the school entrances hesitating to move
forward. He looks down slowly keeps his right hand on his heart and closes his
eyes
Scene
changes – (background change) To the heart where his heart with full of emotion
and tears in the eyes. Tells him that everything will be ok.
Scene changes
- (background change) To Roy, he looks at the school takes a deep breath and
starts moving forward towards his class. As he walks towards his class he sees
ben (bully) waiting for him outside his class as usual. Roy hides himself from ben
Scene changes
- (background change) As the bell rings ben moves to his class and Roy here
sees ben going takes a deep breath and goes to his class
Scene change
- (background change) at the end of the day the bell rings again school hours
are over Roy sits in the empty class sweating in fear, with the close up shot
to his sweat dropping from his head. waits
for everyone to leave the school. Roy sees
out of the window and sees no one, thinking that everyone left
Scene change
- (background change) on the other side ben is standing alone under a tree
waiting for Roy to pass by, to have some fun with him, Roy tries to sneak out. But
ben finds him
Scene change
- (background change) ben pushes Roy towards the tree and beats him and leaves,
Roy slowly get up with tears walks to his house
Scene change
- (background change) Roy enters his room burst out his anger throws his bag
and starts crying he sleeps crying … his heart pops out of his body and calls
out his brain to have a conversation about the situation.
Scene change
- (background change) heart and brain have conversation and heart starts
turning black and brain get worried and tries to stop heart turning black ….
but finally brain couldn’t stop heart from turning black.
THE END
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